We read "Beans" by Patricia Grace which has a part about a boy playing hard during his rugby game. We thought about a time when we have played hard. We did lots of visualising to help us remember this time and then we wrote about it.
We still have a bit to work on but here are some of our first attempts at showing rather than telling our readers what is happening.
By Jack G
By George
By Jack M
By Anja
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