Hello!
Welcome to our blog and our first ever blog post! To kick our blog off I thought I'd put up a new interactive video we found to help us with our explanation writing. We really liked the voices and playing the game on it.
Since it's a video from the BBC Skillswise website and not our own we can't just put the video up so instead here's the link! Go check it out and let us know how you do!
Big Babies Explanation
Hi Room 9! Great to see you now have your own blog site! I had a go at your weblink. I liked the way they showed you how to write a good explanation, but they suggested that you start a sentence with "and" and I was always taught that was wrong... So I googled it... and according to this link http://www.dailywritingtips.com/can-you-start-sentences-with-%E2%80%9Cand%E2%80%9D-and-%E2%80%9Cbut%E2%80%9D/
ReplyDeletethese days it seems it can be okay to start sentences with such conjunctions, so I learned something - thanks!! I also thought the crazy golf like game was pretty tricky!!
I think your new blog looks great!!!!!!
ReplyDeletehi,your blog looks great.the big babies explanation clip was cool.
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